#15 correction
Certainly] "neighbour" can be roughly defined [defind defind defind defind definite definitely ] as a person who lives near you. However, I think that a neighbor is also the first person we can ask for help when we have everyday troubles [(since you say "everyday troubles" here, it's obvious that you mean "not in serious situations.)] with money or some such matter. Therefore, the main quality of a neighbour is to be easy-going and open to listen to you and to communicate with you.
On the other hand, I doubt that anyone will be glad to share all his or her own things and spend so much time with the neighbour. If your neighbour is irritating [irritable OR irritating - slightly different meanings. Irritable means that the neighbor gets irritated easily; irritating means that the neighbor irritates YOU] and hostile, or [(you need "and" or "or" or something here - only the comma will not suffice to connect the two ideas.)] if he avoid speaking with you, it is a sign to be careful because your constant ["strong attention" doesn't really work - I think you mean "constant attention" or "frequent interaction"] attention can make you and your neighbour [] enemies.
For example, I know how terrible and dangerous [] neighbours can be. My grandparents live in communal flat where different rooms are occupied [(possessed is usually used for something you can hold, and is usually used in the noun form, like "Look at all of my possessions!" if you're talking about your desk, chair, violin, new mug, plant, etc.)] by different people. Unfortunately, my relatives were not lucky as their neighbour turned out to be an alcoholic and a very aggressive man. My grandmother [("granny" is really casual)] suffered very much because she tried being a friendly and kind neighbour to him but he rejected [] any good and human attention and only threatened and shouted every day until his death.
Though that man was an example of an awful neighbour, not everything was bad. The other neighbours in the third room were very polite and gentle. My grandparents became very good friends with them. These people accord to my notion of really good neighbours. They take part in the life of my relatives, they help them and simultaneously, and they are not annoying [(same issue with annoying/annoyed as enjoyable/enjoy or irritating/irritable)] or boring. When my grandmother or grandfather is ill, the neighbours go to the pharmacy and buy necessary drugs.[drug drug drug drug]
In summary, the good neighbour is a neighbour who is ready to support you as it is needed and who....
**there's really no time when you should write "found them/him/her/it as." Instead of "I found him as a wonderful person," you should say, "In my opinion, he is a wonderful person," or, "I realized that he is a wonderful person," or, "He is wonderful to me."
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Certainly] "neighbour" can be roughly defined [defind defind defind defind definite definitely ] as a person who lives near you. However, I think that a neighbor is also the first person we can ask for help when we have everyday troubles [(since you say "everyday troubles" here, it's obvious that you mean "not in serious situations.)] with money or some such matter. Therefore, the main quality of a neighbour is to be easy-going and open to listen to you and to communicate with you.
On the other hand, I doubt that anyone will be glad to share all his or her own things and spend so much time with the neighbour. If your neighbour is irritating [irritable OR irritating - slightly different meanings. Irritable means that the neighbor gets irritated easily; irritating means that the neighbor irritates YOU] and hostile, or [(you need "and" or "or" or something here - only the comma will not suffice to connect the two ideas.)] if he avoid speaking with you, it is a sign to be careful because your constant ["strong attention" doesn't really work - I think you mean "constant attention" or "frequent interaction"] attention can make you and your neighbour [] enemies.
For example, I know how terrible and dangerous [] neighbours can be. My grandparents live in communal flat where different rooms are occupied [(possessed is usually used for something you can hold, and is usually used in the noun form, like "Look at all of my possessions!" if you're talking about your desk, chair, violin, new mug, plant, etc.)] by different people. Unfortunately, my relatives were not lucky as their neighbour turned out to be an alcoholic and a very aggressive man. My grandmother [("granny" is really casual)] suffered very much because she tried being a friendly and kind neighbour to him but he rejected [] any good and human attention and only threatened and shouted every day until his death.
Though that man was an example of an awful neighbour, not everything was bad. The other neighbours in the third room were very polite and gentle. My grandparents became very good friends with them. These people accord to my notion of really good neighbours. They take part in the life of my relatives, they help them and simultaneously, and they are not annoying [(same issue with annoying/annoyed as enjoyable/enjoy or irritating/irritable)] or boring. When my grandmother or grandfather is ill, the neighbours go to the pharmacy and buy necessary drugs.[drug drug drug drug]
In summary, the good neighbour is a neighbour who is ready to support you as it is needed and who....
**there's really no time when you should write "found them/him/her/it as." Instead of "I found him as a wonderful person," you should say, "In my opinion, he is a wonderful person," or, "I realized that he is a wonderful person," or, "He is wonderful to me."
different different different different different different different different different
everyone everything
aggressive aggressive aggressive
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